I felt the sun today
and lifted my face.
Forget wrinkle warnings
for once; it’s February
and sunlight is like water
after days of only coffee.
I felt the sun today
and lifted my face.
Forget wrinkle warnings
for once; it’s February
and sunlight is like water
after days of only coffee.
This is great.
The reader gets a glimpse into the narrator’s psyche with the phrase “forget the wrinkle warnings for once”.
That first real ray of sunlight after a cold winter is transformational. And I am completely envious of how you capture that in the last two lines.
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Edgar,
Thank you so much. Your words have truly made my morning!
sunlight is like water
after days of only coffee.
beautiful and stunning lines.
love it very much!
smiles, 😉
Thank You so much!