Whispering Wind

Blog of Author Darlene Franklin Campbell

Kiss the Sun

Posted on February 21, 2010 by Darlene Franklin-Campbell

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I felt the sun today
and lifted my face.
Forget wrinkle warnings
for once; it’s February
and sunlight is like water
after days of only coffee.

5 thoughts on “Kiss the Sun”

edgarastonehill

edgarastonehill on February 21, 2010 at 4:35 am said:

This is great.

The reader gets a glimpse into the narrator’s psyche with the phrase “forget the wrinkle warnings for once”.

That first real ray of sunlight after a cold winter is transformational. And I am completely envious of how you capture that in the last two lines.

http://edgarastonehill.com

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- Darlene Franklin-Campbell – Appalachia – I believe we are great spiritual beings on a journey through this physical realm and we each have gifts to share along the way. Writing is one of the ways in which I get to share my gifts. Thank you for giving me the opportunity to share with you.
  
  nochipa on February 21, 2010 at 3:15 pm said:
  
  Edgar,
  
  Thank you so much. Your words have truly made my morning!
  
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Jingle on February 22, 2010 at 2:54 am said:

sunlight is like water
after days of only coffee.

beautiful and stunning lines.
love it very much!

smiles, 😉

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- Darlene Franklin-Campbell – Appalachia – I believe we are great spiritual beings on a journey through this physical realm and we each have gifts to share along the way. Writing is one of the ways in which I get to share my gifts. Thank you for giving me the opportunity to share with you.
  
  nochipa on February 22, 2010 at 1:27 pm said:
  
  Thank You so much!
  
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